‘You know he has a crush on you, dear’ said Mia having a big smile on her face to Anna.’Oh really ‘ said Anna casually painting her nails. ‘Yep’ the other replied. ‘Who wouldn’t? I am the prettiest girl studying in college’ she said abashing her friend. ‘Belle thinks she is beautiful , oh come on she hasn’t seen herself on mirror. She is so dark ” she said when she saw Belle crossing from window. Hearing all these Mia felt tristful and um and ahed in front of her friend deciding what to say. She didn’t mind her friend’s word as she was well acquainted with those and she too believed she isn’t that beautiful .’ In which beauty parlor do you go? I too want to be beautiful like you ‘ she said as she wanted to change the topic.
‘You come with me this Sunday, I will show you. You won’t get as much beautiful as I am but at least your beauty can be enhanced. By the way if you don’t remember there’s party at Sunday evening she said. Mia again um and ahed and replied ‘ok I will be waiting, to know your secret ‘and went away from her as she felt heartbroken with her friend’s words. But she kept telling herself she isn’t that beautiful that’s why Anna tells her so. She lied herself to bed and went to sleep.
The next day arrived, it was Sunday. They both drank coffee, with some hearty breakfast and decided their, To-Do list for Sunday. They will be dressing themselves in most beautiful dress they have for party, then they would go to church for worshipping Jesus which is to be followed by shopping and then they would relax in beauty parlor.
They dressed themselves in most beautiful party dress they had and made their way to the church. Mia asked Jesus to keep the birds happy and cheerful with their tummy full ,which she saw outside the church. She too asked Jesus to change her friend’s attitude towards everyone. On the other hand Anna asked Jesus to make her, her kind of beautiful. She knows she is beautiful but her inner beauty is not revealed. After that they made their way to the shopping mall. The girls enjoyed shopping there and after that Anna took Mia to the beauty salon at the first floor.
‘Welcome ma’am to our salon’ . ‘Okay, okay now help us fast , we have to attend a party !!’Anna said. ‘How can we help you maam’ said the staff. ‘Make both of us as beautiful as we are !!’said Anna. ‘Maam please take your seats’.’Do it fast we have to go!’. Soon their treatment started. The staff applied face masks to them saying it will show their inner beauty.’Do fast , there’s no time to chit – chat with us!!’ instructed Anna. Listening to this the other staff who was treating Mia started hurrying and mistakenly her elbow touched Anna. ‘What the hell are you doing idiot? You touched me with that dirty hand of yours!!! Anna shouted. ‘We are very sorry ma’am . It won’t happen again’ said the other staff. ‘Forgive her Anna, it’s just a hand and that too wasn’t done intentionally’ said Mia. ‘It’s absolutely alright,, please carry on’ she added. ‘Please hurry up, we have to go!!!’ shouted Anna. Soon the makeup and hair styling were over and Anna was seeing herself in mirror. She was looking as if she was prettiest girl in the world. She was very happy admiring herself. Paying her bills, Mia thanked them and went back to Anna who was lost in her face .’Pay them ‘she whispered. ‘Oh yes , take this’ said Anna giving money to the staff and went out hurriedly.
To be continued in next part II…………..
134 replies on “My Kind of Beautiful……… (Part I)”
Inner beauty is the real one. Loved reading your story 👌👌, eagerly waiting for the next part 😊😊
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Thanks for reading and appreciating. Stay tuned for the next part 😊😊
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Nice story, Dulcy! Waiting for more!❣❣
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Thanks for stopping by and reading as well as appreciating it 😊
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We have a great writer among us! (*Dulcy Singh*)
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Thanks for always supporting and encouraging 🙏
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Your are a real writer, not fake news!
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Lovely story, Dulcy! You’ve captured the theme beautifully making the story, both inspiring and captivating.
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I am glad you liked my story. Thanks for the appreciation 😊😇Stay tuned for the next part 😊
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My pleasure! And will do!
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😊😊
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I can’t wait for the next episode
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I am glad you liked my story so much that you can’t wait. My mother too replied this after reading my story. 😊😊
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Good story you got Dulcy..say hi to mum-tell her she the greatest.
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Surely. Thanks from her side too 😊😊
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Peace and love
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Nice story! Do you write all these stories?
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Thanks a lot.😊😊 Yep I write on my own, but I take some backgrounds from mother sometimes when ideas don’t pop inside me .
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Oh cool!
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Oh🥶 please post the second part of it ❗❗I am eagerly waiting for part 2 🤩
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Your comment made my day.Thanks a lot for such encouraging comment. I will be posting soon .
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🤩🤩🥳I am waiting dear
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😊😊😍😍
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I liked the way you have narrated a simple story in a unique way 🙂
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Thanks a lot for such supportive feedback it really motivates me 😊😊
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Marvelous 👌🏻❤️❤️❤️
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I am glad you liked it. Thanks a lot 😊
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Beautiful story again dulcy. You keep coming with these wonderful stories. Amazing keep it up.
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Thanks for reading as well as appreciating my story. Stay tuned for the next part 😊😊
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Eagerly waiting for it and I am sure it will be very amazing.
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Thanks 😊
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A man’s crush on a woman is he has opened the door to love
her *&* open her heart to return love.”
__Van Prince
The story is mind-catching authentic!
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Thanks a lot 😊😊
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Your writings are verb superb!
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You are fast becoming a masterpiece writer!
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Thanks I feel honoured by your kind words. Stay tuned for the next part.
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I am looking forward to the next part!
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It is really good 😃. I’ll be waiting for the next.
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Thanks for reading as well as appreciating my story. It really means a lot. I will be posting second part soon 😊😊
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This is a great story!
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Thanks for reading my story, I am glad you liked it 😇😇
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I don’t like Anna, but she did say, “Make both of us as beautiful as we are!” so I’m starting to think she might be OK after all. Keep us waiting a bit longer, Dulcy, but not too long.
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Thanks for stopping by and reading my story as well as appreciating it..I will be posting the next part soon. 😇😊
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Great story Dulcy!
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Thanks a lot for appreciating my story and reading it as well. It really means a lot 😊😊
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You are most welcome!
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Beautiful story
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Thanks for appreciating 😊
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Welcome maam
😊😊😊👍🏻
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Well done
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Such a lovely story. 😊😀
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Thanks for sharing your precious comment☺
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Most welcome dear!🤗☺️
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Good story…waiting for the 2nd part…😍
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Thanks a lot for appreciating my story. I will post it soon 😊
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❤
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Great story Dulcy… Waiting for Part 2 ! 😊
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Thanks a lot for reading my story as well as appreciating it. It really means a lot. I will be posting it soon 😊😊
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Wow great!
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Great story
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Thanks for reading my story 😊😊
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Good flow of thoughts on the story, Dulcy 👍🏻
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Thanks a lot for stopping by and reading my posts. I am glad you liked it. Stay tuned for the next part 😊
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👍🏻😊
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Really well written, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The premise was similar to many well established novels that I have read.
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I am really feeling honored with such inspiring words. Thanks for reading and sharing your precious comments. It really means a lot 😊😊
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My pleasure. Well deserved :), looking forward to more from you.
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Ya definitely will be posting soon 😊
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Self worth is beauty, believe you are and it follow, I like your constructions, beautiful.👏
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Very true thanks for sharing your precious thoughts, it really means a lot 😊😊
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You are welcome. Hope to read them on hard cover soon.
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Its really an honor to hear someone appreciating like this. It made my day. Thanks again 😊😊
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Brilliant..
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Thanks!!!
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Most welcome 😊
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Interesting story, Dulcy.
This happens in real life. Words of downgrade from our friends can really affect and push us into low self esteem. I dislike when friends do that but I also think we should hold in the highest priority the positive thoughts we have of our own self
Thanks for sharing 💚
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Very beautiful thoughts sir. I am glad you found the story interesting. It really motivates me. Please stay tuned for the next part. Good day 😊😊
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Superb 😉🙏👌
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Thanks a lot 😊🙏
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Excellent story, Dulcy! 😁 I loved it! Can’t wait for part II!
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Thanks a lot for reading my story as well as appreciating it. I am glad you liked it. I will be posting it soon till then stay tuned 😊😊
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Thanks a lot for reading and appreciating it. I am glad you liked it. I will be posting it soon till then stay tuned😊😊
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You deserve a special thanks my friend 😁🙏👌
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Thanks 😊😊
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Amazing.👐👐👐
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Thanks for appreciating 😊
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Hi, Dulcy! And thanks for dropping by. I must say you are an amazing young lady. Not only are you a great writer, you have the maturity of girls twice your age. Cheers to you, my new young friend! Keep writing!
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Thanks a lot for encouraging me.It really means a lot and motivates me. Thanks for reading my story as well 😊😊
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Don’t hesitate to ask, should there be anything at all you’d like to clarify.
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Thanks a lot 🙏so Sweet of you ,will definitely take your help when ever needed.
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What a wonderful story, keep up the good work. Besides, thank you for visiting and following my blog.
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It was nice meeting you 😁😁
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Dulcy I am waiting for part 2 🤩🤩❣️
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Thanks for stopping by and reading my story .It really means a lot. Next part is on the way 😊
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Eagerly waiting for part 2
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I am glad you found it worth for reading. Thanks a lot. Next part is coming soon 😊
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Amazing
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I am glad you found it amazing. Thanks for reading and appreciating 😊
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Such a beautiful piece, Waiting for next part! ❤️
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I am glad you found it beautiful. Thanks for reading and sharing your precious thoughts. Next part is coming soon. 😊😊
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Will definitely read it ❤️ You’re such a great writer!
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You have the right idea about beauty, Dulcy. Outer beauty is only temporary. Inner beauty lasts. ❤
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Your appreciation makes me happy always .keep supporting and loving me. Stay blessed and safe 😊😊
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Great story on a good note. Loved reading this
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I am glad you liked the story. It really means a lot. Stay blessed and safe 😃 😀
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the pleasure is all mine
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🤩🤩🤩🤩Amazing story!
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I am glad you liked the story. It really means a lot. Stay blessed and safe always. Keep sharing your posts and smiles 😃 😀
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😊
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Looking forward to the next part.
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Thanks for reading, next part has come, please check 😊😊 have a great day ahead
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This is so good. Your creative mind amazes me.
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Thanks a ton for appreciation and for supporting me always ❤. It really means a lot to me 🥰🥰
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Great story❤
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Thanks for sharing your precious thoughts 😊
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Fabulous post
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I am glad you liked it 😊
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Amazing story mate
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Thanks for stopping by and reading this. Your appreciation really means a lot. Best wishes 😃💖
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I am glad you liked my site 😊
I didn’t hire any designer, I did it myself 😉
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Hi Dulcy,
Lovely to meet you here. Your post read on a sunny Sunday morning has really brightened my day here in England. I have skim read it & will return later today.
I love your handbag you are holding on your About pic.
Take care
❤️🙂🙏💁🏻♀️
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I am glad you loved it, and it was nice meeting you ma’am. Thanks for sharing such lovely comments 😀 have a great Sunday 👍 😀 ❤💝🙏🙏
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My pleasure Dulcy. Have a great Sunday also 👍😄❤️💖🙏🙏
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Hi Dulcy!!
I’m really impressed with your stories!! Great stories with a message
I like making cartoon movies and I just got some software to make one so can I use your this story to make one and publish on YouTube if my cartoon animation movie got successfully build up?
I’ll give full credit to your story!
Your answer is accepted my me even if yes or no 😉😊
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*full credit to you for your story..
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Thank you 💛💛🤗🤗😘😘
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Thank you so much dear😘😘🤗🤗
Yes , you can.It really means a lot , you choosed my story out of so many!! You made my day.
Can you give me link to your channel, I will subscribe it 💛💛
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Oh thank you so much!!
And I do not own a channel till now.. But I’m planning to make… Making some videos on my art and craft….. when it will be ready I’ll provide you with the link 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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🤗💛 eager to watch your videos
Sure 😁
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